Hook text on screen: a plan for the first three seconds, word by word

A prompt that plans what text appears in the first 3 seconds of a vertical video: the words, the moment each appears, the hold, what the picture does under it. Written so the hook works muted.

Plan the on-screen text for the first 3 seconds of a vertical video about {topic}. The video autoplays muted; the text must carry the hook alone.

Output a table: Time in (s) | Text (exact words) | Hold (s) | Where in frame | What the picture does under it | Why the viewer stays.

Rules:
- Max 2 text events in 3 seconds. Max 5 words each.
- The first text lands at 0.0-0.3 s, not after a logo.
- Hold = words / 2.5 seconds, minimum 1.2 s (a parameter).
- The text is one of: a number the viewer can check, a contradiction, a question with a one-word answer, a 'before' label over a 'before' picture.
- Frame position: middle third, or upper third if the subject's face is in the middle; never the bottom 20 percent.
- The picture under the text moves: motion toward the camera, a hand entering, a reveal; never a static frame with text on it.
- The spoken hook, if any, must not be the same sentence as the text.

Then write 3 alternative text pairs for A/B, each with a different hook type.

Context:
{what the video shows in the first 3 seconds, and the hook line if spoken}

In Claude Code, paste the prompt as a message.

Steps

  1. Describe the actual first 3 seconds of footage you have; the plan is for that picture, not an imagined one.
  2. Mock the two text events on a frame grab and look at it on a phone at arm's length before editing.
  3. Post the A/B pairs as separate videos a day apart; note which hook type held viewers past 3 seconds for this topic.

Tips

  • Five words at 2.5 words per second is 2 seconds. Two events fill 3 seconds exactly; a third is unreadable.
  • The cold open rule from real footage applies: the picture under the hook is chosen by eye for fire, water, neon, motion toward the camera, a face with an expression.
works withClaude Code: Runs as a skill or a prompt in the terminal; can read your files and write the result. · Claude: Paste into claude.ai or the Claude app. · ChatGPT: Paste into ChatGPT; works with any GPT model. · Any LLM: Model-agnostic: Gemini, Mistral, a local model.
costFree. No API, no key.
statusUnverified: written from the technique, not yet run end to end by us.
licenseCC BY 4.0 for the text here; skills are MIT.
updated2026-11-01
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